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Drafts Galore

      You've done it! You've finally completed the first draft of your debut novel, so now what? Are you sending it to a publishing company?  Or an editor? Maybe having a few family members read it first? Finding an agent?      No. No. Sure. Maybe.     You've just finished your first draft, but that doesn't mean you're done writing. Surprise, surprise, your first draft is not going to be a masterpiece. Now that you've finished, you've gotta start it all over again on a completely new document.      Think of it this way: your first draft you're telling yourself the story. It's not going to be perfect because you're still working out all the kinks. The first draft is for you. If you want to share it with your family and friends, go ahead, but nobody else is ever gonna see it. This draft is just the skeleton of what your story will soon become.      Your second draft is where you're telling the story to your readers...

Discussing Dialogue

     An aspect of story telling that some writers struggle with where others may thrive is dialogue. I am proud to be able to say that dialogue is one of my strengths (many of my professors and readers can attest to this), so today I am going to share some of my tips and tricks.      One mistake many people make when writing dialogue is adding complex dialogue tags. For those who might not know, a dialogue tag is when you put "he/she said" at the end of a bit of dialogue to determine which character is speaking. Many novice writers like to embellish their dialogue tags by saying "she dictated" or "she told them." While these are not necessarily bad phrases to use, it can become a little distracting if every other dialogue tag is something completely different from the last. Most readers have trained their brains to ignore the phrase "he/she said," so when it get's switched up every time, it makes it harder to focus on what the characters are ...